Académique Documents
Professionnel Documents
Culture Documents
Construction of Clear
Sentences and
Paragraphs
Simple Structure
Complex
Adapt to for less
Structure for
2
readers knowledgeable
more
knowledgeable
Too short is
also bad Sentence
Better
Communication
Too much
Less information
information -
easy to
miscommunication
remember
Example: Effect of long sentences
3
Not at first!
Not clear what was explained – but perhaps you
know the subject.
Too many words create confusion.
Best vague communication
Worst miscommunication
Distracting, and Irritating Sentences
5
more interesting.
Cluttering Phrases
10
Clutter shorter
Along the lines of Like
At the present time Now
For the purpose of For
For the reason that Because
In the near future Soon
In the few cases Seldom
Surplus Words
12
dropped:
His performance was good enough to qualify him
for the promotion.
More Examples of Surplus Words
14
Purposeless
We have not received your
payment covering invoices
covering June and July
purchases.
It would be better to write
the sentence like this:
We have not received your
payment covering
Needless Repetition Repetition Eliminated
Please endorse your name on Please endorse this check.
the
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back of this check.
We must assemble together at We must assemble at 10:30
10:30 AM in the morning. AM.
Our new model is longer in Our new model is longer than
length than the old one. the old one.
One should know the basic One should know the
fundamentals of clear writing. fundamentals of clear writing.
At the present time, we are We are conducting two
conducting two clinics. clinics.
We should plan in advance We should plan.
for the future.
Redundancies
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You have two items of information to write. One is that the company
lost money last year. The other is that its sales volume reached a
record high. You could present the information in at least 3 ways.
Emphasis
The company enjoyed record sales
on sales
increase last year, although it lost money
Giving the Sentences Unity
25
Excessive
details
Unrelated Illogical
ideas constructions
Unrelated Ideas
26
Beginning
/ending
Ideas
Clear
stand out
Narrow
Logical
topic
Unity of
idea
Example of Violation of Unity
30
Be short.
Short paragraphs show
organization better .
Readers prefer short
paragraphs.
About eight lines is a good
average length.
But length can and should vary
with need.
Organizing Paragraphs
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