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To work as a group to write a clear explanation

including persuasive techniques.
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`ach Dragon needs to join an Inventors group

to give advice.
`ach group now has to produce the following:

± An illustration of your invention with labels

± A written explanation of your invention using
persuasive techniques

There is an idea on the next slide ±

I¶m sure you could all do better than this!
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˜ou all need one of these amazing
cars. They run without any use of fossil
fuels, they are extremely cheap to run,
and they keep you fit and healthy in a
fun way!
We all know that the planet is being
seriously injured by our use of wasteful
and expensive fossil fuels. Using our
bodies to power our vehicles is a
sensible way to improve the health of
both our bodies and the environment.
`ighty five per cent of people we
surveyed agreed that the fabulous
µpeople powered car¶ would improve the

± can you spot some quality of their life.
persuasive techniques in Do you really want to miss out?
the explanation?
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˜ou all need one of these amazing
cars. They run without any use of fossil
fuels, they are extremely cheap to run,
and they keep you fit and healthy in a
fun way!
We all know that the planet is being
seriously injured by our use of wasteful
and expensive fossil fuels. Using our
bodies to power our vehicles is a

± can you spot some sensible way to improve the health of
persuasive techniques in both our bodies and the environment.
`ighty five per cent of people we
the explanation?
surveyed agreed that the fabulous
Facts and figures µpeople powered car¶ would improve the
Including the audience quality of their life.
`motive language
Do you really want to miss out?
Rhetorical question
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þave you:
Used emotive language?
Used a rhetorical question?
Included the audience?
Used facts and figures?