Académique Documents
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Writing Clearly
Improve these:
Each and every one
The reason why is that
In spite of the fact that
I want to call your attention to
There is no doubt that
This is for documentation purposes.
Repeat it again.
Mix the ingredients together.
Signing the contract is a necessary requirement.
They did not pay attention to the traffic sign.
He was not very often on time.
Clearly
Writing
and Concisely
1. Use definite, specific, concrete language
•number
•dates and time
•place
•people
•Frequency
•Answer Whs and How Questions
2.Use familiar, simple words;
avoid clichés, slang and jargon
3. Use lists, bullets, etc
4. Use consistent subjects, pronouns, tenses, etc
5. Avoid turning verbs to nouns
6. Be direct: use active voice, positive structure
7. Omit unnecessary words
Clearly
Writing
- avoid redundant, wordy expressions
and Concisely
Improve these:
A period of unfavorable weather set in.
Clearly,
Writing
and Concisely
Melanie explained the proposal to Joy, but she was not happy with it.
We have received your letter and are happy to provide you with the data
you requested.
Clearly
Writing Improve these
and Concisely
Improve these:
I need those documents ASAP.
You need to pay your bill or we have no choice but to cut off your
service.
You didn’t read the instructions carefully, so your system has shut
down.
Courteously
Use sentence heads for courtesy
May I / Shall I / Could I
I hope you don’t mind/ Do you mind if
Could you/Would you
I would appreciate it if
I really wish I could, but…
It looks like…/It appears as if/that…
Perhaps you know this already, but I
feel it bears repeating/reminding…
I don’t mean to
confuse/bother/offend/etc you
Courteously
I need those documents ASAP.
Could you give me those documents by the end of the day?
Finish the report by tomorrow.
I hoped/wondered/thought you could finish the report by tomorrow.
You need to pay your bill or we have no choice but to cut off your
service.
We would appreciate it if you could pay the full amount by ___ to
continue using the service.
You didn’t read the instructions carefully, so your system shut down.
The system may shut down if the software incorrectly installed.
I can’t help you on this matter.
I’m afraid I can’t do that…What I can do is…
Writing
Courteously
This is to remind everyone of the observance of official work hours.
Failure to comply will be met with sanctions.
Courteously
Improve these
I know you are very busy, but I would really like to meet
with you.
Clearly, Concisely
Writing
Be sincere
• courtesy or confidence without sincerity is patronizing
(talking down)
- personalize (use I/we hope/believe/feel statements)
Courteously
and Confidently
We are very sorry, but we cannot meet the deadline for the report
tomorrow because we still have not finished all the diagrams and other
attachments.
We would be grateful if you can allow us to submit the report on Dec 11.
This would allow us to complete all the diagrams that would make the
report easier to understand.
I’m sure you will agree that my qualifications match your job needs.
I hope you could review my resume to see how my qualifications closely
match the needs of the job.
I know you are very busy, but I would really like to meet with you.
Writing
You extensive experience will be inspiring to
Courteously to our team so we look forward to meeting
you. Would 10am Thursday be convenient?
and Confidently
I hope you will contact me. I know my qualifications are not very impressive, but
I hope that you will give me a chance.