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Chapter -3
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to understand Use the more complex structure when appropriate or with more verbal able people Simplicity is needed for the best communication effect Making each sentence express a main idea Engaging and informing busy readers Ordering the sentence elements according to accepted rules Delivering contents in easy-to-digest chunks
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Writing effective sentence Do grouping an ordering the information How much information will we put into each sentence? Familiarity with different sentence elements Whether or not we know readers grammatical levels Many kinds of clauses, phrases, and types of modifiers
1.Bill Jones, a drill press operator who has been with allied manufacturing for 15 years will be retiring on June 15 2.Bill Jones will be retiring on June 15.he has been a drill press operator with allied manufacture for 15 years Both ways indicate that Bill Jones will be retiring the first version adds the order facts as modifying phrases, whereas the second version gives certain additional facts a bit more significance by putting them in their own sentence. Which way is better ? It depends on the effect we want to achieve
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mind limitation. Short means about 16-18 words for middle-level reader for less advanced readers,it should be lower Short sentence can be achieved in two waysLimiting content is one ways to make short sentences is through word economy Seek shorter ways of saying things. following are some suggestions-
Shorter substitutions
Now For Because, since Soon Seldom To
in the meantime
Meanwhile
enough to qualify him for the promotion There are four rules that should be observed I am prepared to report the effect that sales increased
enough to qualify him for the promotion four rules should be observed I am observed to report that sales increased
direct
The president believes the tax
opinion that the tax was paid He criticized everyone he come in contact with The price increase will afford the company an opportunity to retire the debt
was paid
He criticized everyone he met The price will enable the
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Repetition eliminated
He stated that he believes we are
that we are responsible The provision of section 5 provides for a union shop In my opinion, I think the plan is sound We must assemble together at 10:30 am in the morning
responsible section 5 provides for a union shop I think the plan is sound We must assemble at 10:30 am
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unity You can avoid this error by (1) putting unrelated ideas in separates sentence (2) subordinating an idea or (3) adding words that show relationship Excessive detail is another cause of lack of unity. So can mixed constructions Active and passive voice in same sentence can violet unity
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rules of grammar These rules are based on custom and logical relationship For example, dangling modifiers confuse meaning So do unparallel constructions, pronouns without antecedents, and subject-verb disagreements
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or idea (unity) Generally paragraphs should be short Short paragraphs shows organization better than long ones Most readers prefer to read short paragraphs A good practice is to question paragraphs over 10 lines The topic sentence can come first, middle or last
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