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14 Examples are provided to gain context (e.g page 1). More research is needed to make more com
14 Good use of "the farm" as an example on pages 1-2. Discussions on paper could also tackle oth
14 Use of figure is instructive (on page 1). Please proofread paper to correct some typos. Use simp
14 Suitable discussion on leadership and orgizational culture is provided in the paper (pages 2-3). M
13 Paper is professionally presented. Ideas could be divided into paragraphs to organize discussion
9 Please place the work in a word format next time. Sufficient discussion on "teamwork" is provid
14 More discussion on leadership and teamwork could be more useful in making compelling argum
15 More examples are needed to achieve context. Figure in page 2 is instructive.
15 Please do not put your name in the paper. Your ID no. is enough. Discussion on paper is quite li
15 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. More research will benefit the paper. Dis
14 You cite various authors well throughout the paper. Conclusion could be longer to summarize a
14 Suitable discussion is presented throughout the paper. Some claims need to be supported by re
14 Suitable discussion on leadership and teamwork on pages 2-3. This paper could benefit from m
15 Paper could benefit from more research and discussion. Ample examples are presented to achi
11 Kindly proofread your paper to correct grammatical errors. Try to use a uniform format next tim
15 Paper is organized. Please use the standard format for your references.
14 Good discussion on "motivation" on page 2. Please use the standard format for your references
14 Ample example is provided in the paper to achieve context. Please use the standard format for
12 Suitable discussion on "Bureaucracy" on page 1. Suitable amount of academic references were
13 Placing headings on the paper will help guide the reader. Suitable amount of academic referenc
10 This paper could benefit from more research. Placing headings on the paper will help guide the
13 Suitable discussion on leadership and orgizational culture is provided in the paper. Some claims
14 Figure on page 1 is instructive. Suitable discussion on teamwork is made. Suitable amount of ac
13 This paper could benefit from more research. Ample example is provided in the paper.
13 Please put an academic references section on your paper next time. Discussion on "Sencio" is e
12 Placing headings on the paper will help guide the reader. This paper could benefit from more re
12 Suitable discussion on "Personality and individual difference" on page 3. Placing headings on th
15 Paper is professionally presented. Some claims need to be supported by research. Ideas are div
14 Suitable discussion on leadership is provided in the paper (page 3). Ample examples were also g
15 Paper is professionally presented. Heading could be useful to guide the reader.
15 Suitable discussion on the distinction between group work and teamwork on page 3. Please use
13 Suitable discussion on leadership and teamwork on page 3. This paper could benefit from more
10 Wikipedia is not a very good reference to use. Use the standard format for in-text citations.
13 Paper is well-organized. Some claims need to be supported by research. Figures on pages 5-6 a
15 Paper is professionally presented. Ideas are divided into paragraphs to achieve organized discu
12 This paper could benefit from more research. Ample example is provided in the paper.
13 Figures on pages 4-5 are instructive. Suitable discussion on motivation is provided.
13 Suitable examples are provided to achieve context. Suitable discussion on motivation is provide
10 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. More research will benefit this paper.
11 Suitable discussions on "orgnizational structure" and "instrinsic motivation" on page 1-2. Please
14 Suitable discussion on "leadership" on page 3. Ample example is provided in the paper to provi
13 This paper will benefit from more research. Good discussion about "teamwork" on page 2.
11 Use of headings will help guide the reader. An example on "Media Entertainment industry" is p
9 Please be consistent with your format (e.g font, style, spacing). Please proofread your work to c
12 Please put a reference section for all your academic resources. This paper needs more research
13 Some claims need to be supported by research. Suitable discussion on leadership and orgizatio
13 This paper is well-researched. The example on "Amazon" really provides great context to the pa
11 Use of headings will help guide the reader. In general, this paper will benefit from more researc
13 Figures on pages 1-3 are very instructive. In general, this paper will benefit from more research
11 Please proofread your paper to correct grammatical errors. This paper will benefit from more r
12 Suitable discussions on leadership and teamwork are provided in the paper (page 2). Please use
11 Suitable discussion on "organisational structure" on page 1. Suitable amount of academic resou
12 Suitable discussion on leadership and orgizational culture is provided in the paper.Please use th
10 Placing headings on the paper will help guide the reader. Please use proper format for referenc
10 Please put a reference section to place all your academic references. Discussions on the paper
14 Paper is well-organized. This paper would benefit from more academic research.
11 This paper could benefit from more research. Please use the standard format for references.
14 Discussion in the paper is limited. More research is needed to achieve more compelling argume
15 Suitable discussion on "leadership" on page 2. Ample example is provided in the paper to provi
14 Paper lacks sufficient example to achieve context. Sufficient academic references is used in the
14 Paper is well-organized. In general, this paper will benefit from more research. Figures on page
11 Sufficient academic references is used in the paper.Placing headings on the paper will help guid
14 Suitable discussion on leadership and teamwork on pages 2-3. Some claims need to be support
11 Placing headings on the paper will help guide the reader. More research is needed to achieve m
15 Paper is professionally presented. In general, this paper will benefit from more research. Ideas
14 Suitable discussion on "organisational structure" on page 1. Suitable amount of academic resou
13 Suitable discussion on "motivation" and "leadership" on page 2. Suitable amount of academic r
16 Paper is professionally presented and well-organized. Suitable discussion on "motivation" and "
14 This paper could benefit from more research. Paper is professionally presented and well-organ
14 Suitable discussion on leadership and teamwork on page 3. This paper could benefit from more
11 This paper could benefit from more research on the subject matter. Suitable discussion on "org
12 Comprehensive discussions found in the paper. Headings are useful to guide the reader.
14 Suitable discussion on Maslow's hierarchy of needs. This paper uses sufficient academic referen
12 This paper needs more discussion on theories. It focuses too much on application. This paper co
14 Suitable discussion on leadership and teamwork on page 5-6. Some claims need to be supporte
11 This paper could benefit from more research on the subject matter. Academic sources used are
13 Some claims need to be supported by academic research. Suitable discussion is presented thro
10 This paper could benefit from more research. Academic sources used are quite limited.
13 Figure on page 1 is instructive. Suitable discussion on teamwork is made. Some claims need to b
12 This paper could benefit from more research. Academic sources used are quite limited.
12 This paper could benefit from more research. Academic sources used are quite limited.
14 Discussion in paper is comprehensive. Figures on pages 2 and 6 are instructive.
13 More examples are needed to provide more context. Suitable discussion on "motivation" and "
12 Sufficient example is provided in the paper to achieve context. Suitable discussion on "motivati
13 In general, more research could be made to further strengthen some arguments. Suitable discu
13 Paper is well-organized. More example are needed to provide more context. This paper uses su
13 Suitable discussion on "motivation" and "leadership" on pages 2-3. Suitable amount of academ
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14 In general, more research could be made to further strengthen some arguments. Suitable discu
13 Comprehensive discussions found in the paper. Headings are useful to guide the reader.
14 Suitable discussion on leadership and orgizational culture is provided in the paper. Ample exam
14 This paper uses sufficient academic resources. More example are needed to achieve context. Su
13 Headings are useful to guide the reader. Comprehensive discussions found in the paper.
14 In general, more research could be made to further strengthen some arguments. Suitable discu
12 This paper could benefit from more research on the subject matter. Academic sources used are
13 Suitable discussion on "motivation" and "teamwork" on pages 2-3. More example are needed t
13 Suitable discussion is presented throughout the paper. More example are needed to achieve co
12 Headings are useful to guide the reader. This paper uses sufficient academic resources.
11 Sentences and paragraphs in the paper need to be more coherent. More example are needed t
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12 Please put a reference section for all your academic resources. This paper needs more research
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17 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. Do not use hyperlink.
11 Discussion in the paper is limited. More research is needed to achieve more compelling argume
13 Suitable discussion is presented throughout the paper. Some claims need to be supported by re
13 Wikipedia is not a very good academic source. Some claims need to be supported by research.
17 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. Do not use hyperlink.
13 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. Do not use hyperlink.
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13 Headings are useful to guide the reader. This paper uses sufficient academic resources.
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13 Please put a reference section for all your academic resources. This paper needs more research
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13 Headings are useful to guide the reader. More research will benefit the paper.
12 More examples are needed to provide more context. More research will benefit the paper.
13 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. Do not use hyperlink.
15 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. Do not use hyperlink.
15 Discussion in the paper is limited. More research is needed to achieve more compelling argume
15 More examples are needed to provide more context. More research will benefit the paper.
14 Suitable discussion on "motivation" and "leadership" on page 2. Please use the standard forma
18 Please use the standard format for your bibliography. Do not just use hyperlink.
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14 More research is needed to make more compelling arguments. Some claims need to be suppor
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